The Perfect Thesis

For todays class we improved upon the giant mega thesis we made as a class yesterday. Yesterday all groups were responsible for making a thesis containing only one element of having a perfect thesis these things being the who, what, where, when, why, and how. Then Rivers just mashed them all together to make this conglomerate thesis. Today we had to take the 133 worded thesis and shorten the word count as a group while also having it retain all the parts that make it the perfect thesis. At the end of class we took a look at evey groups version of the class thesis and had to decide which was the better one that you that was the best and better than yours. Doing all of this stuff with the thesis we made helps us become better writers because it shows us what a thesis made by a highschool junior should look like, what it should require. The thesis should make writing the rest of he essay easy because at  that point you're only stateing your evidence. I onl hope this helps me with writing my own essays in the future.